When a hungry creep took off its veil, a thousand muscles creeped forth. Woman you look so great, and so on and 'ON'. They hunted her for the melody of love, went aghast with a flowery trick, happy with the pleasure of heaven, until she knew the fire is near!
Creepy crap was filled with blood. Months of burden and solitude, alas drained it with the liberating pain. Alive, breathing, the blood had voice. But slender, flimsy, it spoke with awe. Creepy crap did not understand a word, she could only listen to the beat of breath. Worried, anxious, she gave her ribs, and she drunk with the pleasure of desire. I can't kill her, nor can I litter, where has gone those thousand muscles? She cried for help and a call answered, who has asked you to remove the veil? You sought freedom and here it is. You sought pleasure and here is your heaven. Modesty and chastity are indeed my gifts, and for those who guard it is indeed loved.
A muscle approached with might and mane, pierced with the spirit of modern art. He said, at the age of scissors and genes, you can cut the blood whenever you need. Let us drink the wine of love, and let our solace be on plastics and scissors. O' woman you are strong as us, throw away your veils, be free and fly. His flowery trick evolved for muscles, and poor creeps unknown of self, unknown, she falls to the brink of pit. The voice was still in the depth of wisdom. O' man, we have given you wisdom and mercy. And you kill an innocent blood for living! In the love of this world mercy is lost, O' man indeed you are heedless to the words. The muscle took a dip in the voice, baptised, he went in the voice of repentance. He proclaimed the truth for the muscles and creeps, modesty was spread with just and speed. Creeps hid behind the veils, muscles shed their eyes down. Clad with faith and clothed to throat, they all lived a life of piety.
Some funny and serious comments from my friends:
ReplyDelete1) Is this the depiction of the parturition of a rape victim teenager girl who gave birth to her shame inside the forests of human brutality? and the voice of god asking her to live with the shame ? . if so , very nice work , if no , pls f**k your way out of this miserable world and wait for the salvation rotting in hell , drinking rubberized bitumen for an eternity J. That’s the best curse I could come up with , if you can think any better , convey it to me in my name .
Regards,
Someone who is in between psychosis and neurosis after taking the pain to read the complete crap .
2)Beautiful gal gets carried away by lust, ends up with a baby gal.
She looks around for help from those who did this too her.
GOD says “Gave you chastity which you didn’t bother to take care off , you enjoyed what you wanted and you now have the result”.
One man approaches and asks the company of woman and throw away newborn.
Woman now understands what she has done to herself, and in a repenting voice advices man that……he also become a killer (killing the baby), for his lust previously……now for money, where he is capable of earning his own bread.
With that both Man, woman understands what the “value system” is all about, from then on society was at peace.
3)From what I could get from a first glance, this looks like something about an innocent girl who threw her veils away, losing her virginity due to her emotions / desire that she couldn’t control, by being tricked by a man through sweet words ? And then, the girl speaks ; the man feels repentance and embraces faith ; the girl veils herself again , the man gets his head and eyes down ( as in, stops tricking other women ) , and they live together by following their Faith ?
Am I at least slightly close to the meaning or am I completely off mark ?